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Film piracy has a big impact on sale distribution and manipulates the price sale of original copies of films on DVDs and CDs in the market.
There are other groups in the movie industry that also suffer from its loss due to piracy, this includes people work in movie theaters and in retail video stores, and cable and satellite systems, are also to some extent dependent upon the success of movie studios.

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Film piracy has a big impact on sale distribution and manipulates the sale price of original copies of films on DVDs and CDs in the market.
There are other groups in the movie industry that also suffer losses due to piracy. These include people working in movie theaters and in retail video stores. Cable and satellite systems are also to some extent dependent upon the success of movie studios.

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